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[David Seaman]

cold heart
steel breath
blow it off like all the rest
driving home in the pouring rain
just can't find my way
lost on this long day

pounding nails into my brain
never makes me feel the same
listen girl can you help me out
it seems I've lost my way
lost on my long day

stinging eyes
darkened wind
rushing storm and alone again
the night of black and aching cold
can't hear the city streets
no sound of lost soul's feet

one last act and do it loud
shout it out and say it proud
can only be heard with my own ears
storm that swallows my spirit years
I love you so

[Diana]

Post by David Seaman
cold heart
steel breath
blow it off like all the rest
driving home in the pouring rain
just can't find my way
lost on this long day
pounding nails into my brain
never makes me feel the same
listen girl can you help me out
it seems I've lost my way
lost on my long day
stinging eyes
darkened wind
rushing storm and alone again
the night of black and aching cold
can't hear the city streets
no sound of lost soul's feet
one last act and do it loud
shout it out and say it proud
can only be heard with my own ears
storm that swallows my spirit years
I love you so

Diana takes a step back from the bulletin board to admire the new addition
she has tacked up next to the two poems by Mythawk. This one seemed to have
been slipped under the door by a passerby -- someone in the throes of angst,
unfortunately... a good poet, good with images, good with metaphors. It
often takes a dose of angst to bring out the poet in a person, she decides.